Fma fanfic snipet

I wrote a fanfic..basically in short so here it is. This is just a preveiw, mind you. Also this takes place after episode 50-some where Envy dies. Also revised a little. This is also a PREVIEW, left off from the middle-ish. Also a bit of fluff in between madness.
Envy yanked himself backwards and quickly shapeshifted into his prefered state, sliding onto the the cobbled walk. "How-" His question cut short as a bullet tore through his neck. slowly it regenerated and the green haired homunculus felt a wave of saliva mixed with bile wash over his mouth. "Outh..." he winced as he bit his tongue. Riza Hawkeye narrowed her blue eyes and her fingers tightened around the trigger and pulled hard; twice. One in the gut and one in the kneecap. Envy collapsed to his faux hands and knees, feeling sick to his stomach as the wounds slowly closed  and the bullets dissolved under the skin. "Stop!" He cried out in the scratchy voice of his before Hawkeye countinued to shoot him. "Not until you're dead!" The blonde leiutenant gritted her teeth; shoulders trembling with each backfire. "I wasn't gonna-OW!" He exclaimed indignantley at another pot shot at his stomach. "Wasn't gonna hurt you, honest!" he shouted before wobbling to his feet. The oldest homunculus felt something hot and itchy in his violet eyes and brushed it, startled to find his knuckles wet. But not with blood; with a clear, waterey substance. And it came from his eye. The little droplets kept dripping down his face.He thought frustrated thoughts and wiped his back hand across his cheek before lunging at the leuitenant. She restrained him under three more bullets and Envy was getting mad. "That's it!" He snarled and morphed his hand into a mass of writhing , green colored souls. It snaked under the cobbled pavement and around Hawkeye's shoulder,slamming her to the ground. 'Score' He thought, mouth curling into a twisted grin.
There. If you want more, comment.

Thank you

I appreciate all the feedback I've been recieving on my livejournal and all the emails I've been getting from friends (Graci! But I thought you said you never checked...FIBBER!). I really do despise breaking my so-far intelligent answer streak,(don't forget sounding like a fangirl; I may be one but I don't have to go all out like one...hmph.) but thank you! I never thought at my beginner blogging days that I'd be so popular on the net but I am, and thank you fellow bloggers for making this possible !Well, again, thanks. Also, if you think this is my last post ever, you are sadly mistaken. This is merely a thank you annndd...sorry if I'm rambling I'm trying to watch Superman: the movie right now and it's hard to do two things at once. All right, thanks Gotta go!

Mc Reviews: Lelouch Lamperouge

Ah, well. I was going to go through all the Fullmetal Alchemist chars first but I was watching Code Geass for the first time since my awesome cousin recomended it to me and I actually paid attention. I never do that unless it's spongebob. But I did and I thought to myself :

Why not do Lelouch for my next review? So yes, I am.

Ok, Lelouch Lamperouge is not his real name for starts. In fact, It's Lelouch vi Britannia. He is the son of the 39th Britannian Emporer, making him a prince. He's also known as Zero also and while under that alias wears a tri-colored suit of armor and does not reveal his true name other than said name, Zero. Basically under the secret of Zero Lelouch's main purpose in living (as granted to him by that strange blonde girl named C.C. who gives him this Sharigen eye of sorts that lets him kill people by revealing it and giving a death wish.) is to;as said; kill all the bad guys in the world and make himself ruler with all the few good ones around. Yeeeeaaaahhh....that's what Light Yagami said and he's dead now. So, he's got a childhood friend, Suzaku, who is much more attractive than him and died in the first episode, we've got half-brother Clovis whom he murdered after getiing info about their mom's death, and yeah. A load of unimportant chars. Bye now!