Fma fanfic snipet

I wrote a fanfic..basically in short so here it is. This is just a preveiw, mind you. Also this takes place after episode 50-some where Envy dies. Also revised a little. This is also a PREVIEW, left off from the middle-ish. Also a bit of fluff in between madness.
Envy yanked himself backwards and quickly shapeshifted into his prefered state, sliding onto the the cobbled walk. "How-" His question cut short as a bullet tore through his neck. slowly it regenerated and the green haired homunculus felt a wave of saliva mixed with bile wash over his mouth. "Outh..." he winced as he bit his tongue. Riza Hawkeye narrowed her blue eyes and her fingers tightened around the trigger and pulled hard; twice. One in the gut and one in the kneecap. Envy collapsed to his faux hands and knees, feeling sick to his stomach as the wounds slowly closed  and the bullets dissolved under the skin. "Stop!" He cried out in the scratchy voice of his before Hawkeye countinued to shoot him. "Not until you're dead!" The blonde leiutenant gritted her teeth; shoulders trembling with each backfire. "I wasn't gonna-OW!" He exclaimed indignantley at another pot shot at his stomach. "Wasn't gonna hurt you, honest!" he shouted before wobbling to his feet. The oldest homunculus felt something hot and itchy in his violet eyes and brushed it, startled to find his knuckles wet. But not with blood; with a clear, waterey substance. And it came from his eye. The little droplets kept dripping down his face.He thought frustrated thoughts and wiped his back hand across his cheek before lunging at the leuitenant. She restrained him under three more bullets and Envy was getting mad. "That's it!" He snarled and morphed his hand into a mass of writhing , green colored souls. It snaked under the cobbled pavement and around Hawkeye's shoulder,slamming her to the ground. 'Score' He thought, mouth curling into a twisted grin.
There. If you want more, comment.